For some reason, WordPress.com decided to be nasty to me and not let me upload my animatic video, so to defeat the evil elves of WordPress.com, here’s the link!
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For some reason, WordPress.com decided to be nasty to me and not let me upload my animatic video, so to defeat the evil elves of WordPress.com, here’s the link!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8YxhNRnvx0
Feedback from JDU
-the singer must sing the first line. perhaps consider starting the video with the camera on the guitar and then pan/tilt to the singer.
-generally, the editing is to the beat. I like how you continue to go to the guitarists when the guitars are the most prominent part of the song.
-I like how you intergrated the use of panning into your storyboard. Make sure you practise this.
-30 is the first big ‘riff’. The energy in this part of the song must be shown visually. What are you gong to show?
-some of the shot durations are very long. How are you going to keep the audience engaged? use of movement. Narrative within the performance, like a game.
-145..the band is running during a ‘lull’ in the song. What is gong on here? Then, at 150, a guitar comes n. Will this be the first instrument the camera focussed on? How will the pan transition into the introduction of the second instrument.
-226 and 246–the temp picks up. How will you show movement, develop pace?
-I like the zoom at the end.
Top Tip
1. The idea of one cut is excellent. However, you must incorporate some close-ups and extreme close-ups. How are you going to do this and when?
2. Rehearse with the camera numerus times. Professionals usually take ten times to get this right.
JDU